Fedback

R&P = 15
Production = 30
Evaluation = 12

Total = 57 D

Targets:
Complete evaluation activities. Make sure the titles for these posts are 'evaluation task 1' etc
Make sure you discuss explicit examples of where your skills have progressed from preliminary to final piece.
Add to audience profiling posts, explaining how you intend to appeal to your target audience in your opening 2 minutes.
Consider filming additional scenes to show range of shot types  and ability to produce material appropriate to the task set.